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Australia’s international trade

Australia’s international trade 5B1dV
The given line graphs illustrate Australia’s international trade with countries that include the imports from and exports to China, the US, and Japan. Australia’s trade with China has been quite erratic; in 2002 imports fell from nearly 4. 5 billion to about 2. 5 billion in 2003, then it went back up to nearly 4. 5 billion in 2005. Exports started in 2002 with an increase from nearly 2. 5 billion to approximately 4. 5 billion in 2003, but then there was a sudden drop to about 2 billion in 2004, and finally, there was a rise up to nearly 2. 5 billion in 2005. Unlike trade with China, Australia’s trade with the US has been consistent. Imports started with a steady increase in 2002 with approximately 1. 5 billion to nearly 2. 4 billion in 2004, then there a slight decrease back to nearly 2. 1 billion in 2005. Exports had a similar trend starting with an increase in 2002 from nearly 2. 5 billion up to 3. 1 billion in 2004, only to decrease to about 2. 75 billion in 2005.
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line graphs illustrate Australia’s international
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with countries that include the imports from and exports to China, the US, and Japan.

Australia’s
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with China has been quite erratic; in 2002 imports fell from
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4. 5
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to about 2. 5
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in 2003, then it went back up to
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4. 5
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in 2005. Exports
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2. 5
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to approximately 4. 5
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in 2003,
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then there was a sudden drop to about 2
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in 2004, and
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, there was a rise up to
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2. 5
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in 2005.

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with China, Australia’s
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with the US has been consistent. Imports
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with a steady increase in 2002 with approximately 1. 5
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to
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2. 4
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in 2004, then there a slight decrease back to
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2. 1
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in 2005. Exports had a similar trend starting with an increase in 2002 from
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2. 5
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up to 3. 1
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in 2004,
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to decrease to about 2. 75
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IELTS academic Australia’s international trade

Academic
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3 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
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