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the percentage of population of Iceland during 30 years.

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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of population of Iceland during 30 years. Overall. It can be clearly seen that the number of 25-54 population grow considerably in Finlay year whereas 15-24 population declined significantly and 65 population did not find own great in given period. With regard to 25-54 ages was 32 % in 1990. It increased rapidly from 1990 to 2010 by 38%. Meanwhile, 55-64 ages declined moderately to 4%. 0-14 ages of population was 26%. It went down rapidly in given period moreover 15-24 ages declinedtoo. More interestingly the biggest amount belonged to 25-54 ages. The least figure belonged 15-24 ages. And the 25-54 peaked.
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of Iceland during 30 years.

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that the number of 25-54
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grow
considerably
in Finlay year whereas

15-24
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declined
significantly
and 65
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did not find
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own
great in
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With regard to 25-54
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was 32 % in 1990. It increased
rapidly
from 1990 to 2010 by 38%. Meanwhile,
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55-64 ages
declined
moderately
to 4%.

0-14
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of
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was 26%. It went down
rapidly
in
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15-24
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declinedtoo
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the biggest amount belonged to 25-54
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. The least figure belonged 15-24
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. And the 25-54 peaked.
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