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Forests are the lungs of earth . Destruction of forests amount to the death of the world we know. To what extent Do you agree

Forests are the lungs of earth. Destruction of forests amount to the death of the world we know. To what extent Do you agree ewp7G
Forests forest are very important for earth. it is considered that destruction of forest amount lead to dooms day of earth. I strongly support this notion I will discuss some point in upcoming paragraphs with relevant example. Analysing the statement and explaining further, there are a lot of benefits of forest such as forest provide habitat to animals, reptile to birds. Many of the animals dependent on it. It gives fruits as a good to human as well as animals. Trees also give herbs to make medicines forest are very helpful in agriculture as well. For instance, forest protect fertile soil in weather casualties such as thunders, storms and flood by their roots. Forests also clean the environment by purification in air. Forests are the lungs of earth because in human body lungs purify the oxygen as well as blood. Just like that forest also protect environment by purification. Nevertheless, if deforestation continued at same pace, then it can be very dangerous for earth. There are many effects on ecosystem. For instance, when trees cut down then temperature of environment increase which can cause of global warming. If temperature rise day by day then after can reach on death stage, due to global warming glaciers will melt early and which can cause of big flood in the sea. In conclusion, Although there are a lot of benefits of forest to environment, however, it can be very dangerous if deforestation continued at that pace.
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provide habitat to animals, reptile to birds.
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helpful in agriculture
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protect fertile soil in weather casualties such as thunders, storms and flood by their roots.
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clean the
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by purification in air.
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effects on ecosystem.
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, when trees
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down then temperature of
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increase which can cause of global warming. If temperature rise day by day then after can reach on death stage, due to global warming glaciers will melt early and which can cause of
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flood in the sea.
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if deforestation continued at that pace.
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IELTS academic Forests are the lungs of earth. Destruction of forests amount to the death of the world we know. To what extent Do you agree

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