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the graphs below give information about money spent on online purchases in the usa from 2010

the graphs below give information about money spent on online purchases in the usa from 2010 OwAnp

While the first line graph compares total payment splurged on online shopping in the USA throughout five years from 2010, the second one demonstrates a particular company’s proportion of networked paid products. Overall, it is apparent that both the line charts witness an upward trend. Noticeably, there is a more steady growth in the bill paid on the internet than the percentage of total cashed through internet platforms. Regarding the first graph, people in the USA paid more and more money on internet platform shops. They splurged about 175 billion dollars on networked shopping in 2010. By 2011, the total amount of money invested online in this nation was nearly 20 billion dollars more than the previous year. This figure continued growing gradually over the period and peaked at 350 billion dollars in 2015, which is double what it was five years ago. Likewise, the percentage of the whole spending on the internet in one enterprise in the USA also rose during the 2007 – 2013 period. In 2007, the proportion of total purchases made online in a company settled down in America was nearly 30%. This figure climbed dramatically by about 13% in the next two years before showing few changes until 2012. In the following year, this company’s proportion of networked paid products increased steadily and hit its peak at about 47%, which is 19% higher compared to the figure for the whole spending on the internet in this enterprise in 2007.

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