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The percentage of passengers of each public transportation in 2005-2007

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The table illustrates the percentage of travelers from 2005 to 2007 on using 4 types of public transportation. Overall, it can be seen that there was a rise in train and ship travelers. However, the number of plane passengers dropped each year. And bus users are fluctuated. Looking at the details, between 2005 and 2007, there was a slight increase in people riding train transportation from 9 to 24 percent. Similar as ship users, from 2005 to 2007, the passengers had a sharp rise from 6 to 10 percent, and finishing the period years on 2007 by 11 percent. However, the percentage of people travelling by plane was dropped gradually, in 2005 to 2006 it's decreased by 7 percent and then in 2006 to 2007 there was a huge fall of 11 percent. Meanwhile, the bus user's percentage fluctuated from 58 percent to 55 percent and had an increase on the last period of years by 1 percent.
The table illustrates the percentage of travelers from 2005 to 2007 on using 4 types of public transportation.
Overall
, it can be
seen
that there was a rise in train and ship travelers.
However
, the number of
plane
passengers dropped each year. And bus users
are fluctuated
. Looking at the
details
, between 2005 and 2007, there was a slight increase in
people
riding train transportation from 9 to 24
percent
. Similar as ship users, from 2005 to 2007, the passengers had a sharp rise from 6 to 10
percent
, and finishing the period years on 2007 by 11
percent
.
However
, the percentage of
people
travelling by
plane
was dropped
gradually
, in 2005 to 2006 it's decreased by 7
percent
and then in 2006 to 2007 there was a huge fall of 11
percent
. Meanwhile, the bus user's percentage fluctuated from 58
percent
to 55
percent
and had an increase on the last period of years by 1
percent
.
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IELTS academic The percentage of passengers of each public transportation in 2005-2007

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