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pie chart - percentage of social media users in 2018

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The given pie chart provides information about the proportion of people using digital networking according to age group in Jamestown for the year of 2018. Overall, the general trend of Jamestown’s social media users in 2018 showed that the older people were, the less likely they would be to use digital networking. In terms of the most significant feature of the chart, the largest category of digital communicators was the group aged 13 to 25, which accounted for 40% of the total users. Additionally, the next major segment of the population using social media included people aged between 26 and 35, which shoed a slightly lower contribution at 35%. When added together, these two categories made up three quarters of Jamestown’s social media users who used digital platforms in 2018. In stark contrast, the category with the lowest percentage of users included people over 55 years old, accounting for a minute 2% of all users. This trend was joined by people aged 46 to 55 and people between 36 and 45 years of age, representing 8 % and 15%, respectively. Of particular note is that those aged over 36 collectively made up only 25% of Jamestown’s social media users.
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using digital networking according to age group in Jamestown for the year of 2018.

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, the general trend of Jamestown’s
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social
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media
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users
in 2018
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showed
that the older
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people
were, the less likely they would be to
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use
digital networking.

In terms of the most significant feature of the chart, the largest category of digital communicators was the group
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aged
13 to 25, which accounted for 40% of the total
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users
.
Additionally
, the
next
major segment of the population using
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social
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media
included
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people
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aged
between 26 and 35, which
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slightly
lower contribution at 35%. When
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together, these two categories made up three quarters of Jamestown’s
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social
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media
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users
who
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used
digital platforms in 2018.

In stark contrast, the category with the lowest percentage of
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users
included
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people
over 55 years
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old
, accounting for a minute 2% of all
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users
. This trend was
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joined
by
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people
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aged
46 to 55 and
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between 36 and 45 years of age, representing 8 % and 15%,
respectively
. Of particular note is that those
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aged
over 36
collectively
made up
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only
25% of Jamestown’s
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social
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media
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users
.
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IELTS academic pie chart - percentage of social media users in 2018

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