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Line chart shows the consumption of meat

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The line chart illustrates the percentages of meat and poultry consumed in the USA in the period from1955 to 2012. The most outstanding feature in this chart is that there was a significant upward trend in the broilers used whereas the consumption of beef and pork slightly edged down throughout the period. As can be seen from the chart, in 1955 beef was recorded to be the type of meat which was used most, at just below 60 pounds per capita. This could be followed by the amount of pork, ranking in second place with half pounds per capita. By contrast, as with broilers, Turkey was not consumed in the first 5 years of the period. In the following 1 years, the number of used beef soared to reach the peak of hefty 90 pounds per capita. Likewise, starting at tiny 5 pounds and 15 pounds per boneless, the consumption of both broilers and turkey experienced a slight increase to neay 10 pounds and about 15 pounds per boneless respectively. In the last 32-year period, while the number of using beef dramatically declined to finish at only 50 pounds, the amount of broilers consumed was reported to plummet during the period to the end at almost the same percentages as beef. Conversely, both pork and Turkey fluctuated wildly in the given timescale at 45 pounds per capita and 10 pounds per boneless respectively.
The line chart illustrates the percentages of meat and poultry consumed in the USA in the
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period
from1955 to 2012.

The most outstanding feature in this chart is that there was a significant upward trend in the broilers
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used
whereas the consumption of
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beef
and pork
slightly
edged down throughout the period.

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seen
from the chart, in 1955
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beef
was recorded
to be the type of meat which was
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used
most, at
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just
below
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60 pounds
per capita. This could
be followed
by the amount of pork, ranking in second place with half pounds per capita. By contrast, as with broilers, Turkey was not consumed in the
first
5 years of the
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period
. In the following 1 years, the number of
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used
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beef
soared to reach the peak of hefty
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90 pounds
per capita.
Likewise
, starting at tiny
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5 pounds
and
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15 pounds
per boneless, the consumption of both broilers and turkey experienced a slight increase to
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neay
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10 pounds
and about
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15 pounds
per boneless
respectively
. In the last 32-year
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period
, while the number of using
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beef
dramatically
declined to finish at
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only
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50 pounds
, the amount of broilers consumed
was reported
to plummet during the
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period
to the
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end
at almost the same percentages as
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beef
.
Conversely
, both pork and Turkey fluctuated
wildly
in the
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given
timescale at
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45 pounds
per capita and
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10 pounds
per boneless
respectively
.
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