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describe the two map in 2005 and today

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The two maps illustrates changes to the Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today. Looking at the two maps, it is immediately obvious that the Colwick Arts Centre has significant changes with new buildings and facilities. In the past, the gallery was at the left angles to wasteland, it was divided into two buildings, now it unifies into one and replaces the meeting room and snack bar. The meeting room is at the top of gallerry, it is separeted into two tiny buildings. Some places were kept in place and destroyed in turn information desk and snack back. Furthermore, the wasteland is taken place of stage which is surrounded by many trees. The cinema seperated from concert hall, it is in the north of central exhibition. With that, concert hall is at the right angles to the stage. The toilet is moved to the south-east of exhibition area. The drama studio is constructed between meeting rooms and cinema.
The two maps illustrates
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changes
to the Colwick Arts
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Centre
in 2005 and
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today
.

Looking at the two maps, it is immediately obvious that the Colwick Arts
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Centre
has significant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
with new buildings and facilities.

In the past, the gallery was at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
angles to wasteland, it
was divided
into two buildings,
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now
it unifies into one and replaces the meeting room and snack bar. The meeting room is at the top of
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gallerry
, it is
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separeted
into two tiny buildings.
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Some
places were
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kept
in place and
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destroyed
in turn information desk and snack back.

Furthermore
, the wasteland
is taken
place of stage which
is surrounded
by
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many
trees. The cinema
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seperated
from concert hall, it is in the north of central exhibition. With that, concert hall is at the right angles to the stage. The toilet is
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moved
to the south-east of exhibition area. The drama studio
is constructed
between meeting rooms and cinema.
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IELTS academic describe the two map in 2005 and today

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158 words
6.0
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