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The percentage of British people giving money to the charity by different age group from 1990 to 2010.

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The given column graphs illustrate the information regarding the data of British people giving money to Charity by age group from 18 to 65 and above for the years 1990 and 2010. In 1990 43% British people donated their money to the charity whose age between 36 1050 which was the highest where is only 60% giving money to Charity hu whose age between 80 and 25 which was the lowest almost 30% people donated money to the non profitable organisation in 1990 whose age between 26 and 35 and 65 and about 35% British people giving money to Charity whose age between 51 and 65 have ever in 2010 it had experienced A Rise of 39% where is in other age groups such as 18 to 24 25 26 to 35 and 36 250 it was declined 6% 24% and 35% age during 2010 whereas for age group 65 and donation was inclined to 35% in 2010. Overall it can be concluded that 18 to 25 26 235 and 36 250 show a downward trend in 2010 than 1990 where is age group 51 to 65 and 65 and above show and upward trend during 2010 then 1990.
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from 18 to 65 and above for the years 1990 and 2010.

In 1990 43% British
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between 26 and 35 and 65 and about 35% British
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such as 18 to 24 25 26 to 35 and 36 250 it
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during 2010 whereas for
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51 to 65 and 65 and above
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and upward trend during 2010 then 1990.
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IELTS academic The percentage of British people giving money to the charity by different age group from 1990 to 2010.

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