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Task 1 - Map: the maps show the development of a university campus

Task 1 - Map: the maps show the development of a university campus m3aDn
The pictures illustrate the layout of a university campus at two different moments. The first one shows the campus in 2006 and the second shows how it looks now. Overall, it can be seen that the campus has been improved and several buildings have been built or enlarged. The university will then be able to provide students with better facilities. Starting with the center of the campus, the lawn and seating area has been removed. However, the lake experienced no changes. Additionally, the shops and restaurant have been replaced by a new student accommodation. In the northwest side, the teaching block for art and science has been changed into the building for arts only. Because of that, the science building has been built across the road, therefore, the university offices were demolished. Next to it, student accommodation has been expanded from two to four buildings. Lastly, in the bottom left-hand corner, the student accommodation has been widened converted into the student facilities, which provide shops and offices.
The pictures illustrate the layout of a university
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campus
at two
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different
moments. The
first
one
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shows
the
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campus
in 2006 and the second
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shows
how it looks
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now
.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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campus
has been
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improved
and several
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buildings
have
been built
or enlarged. The university will then be able to provide
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students
with better facilities.

Starting with the center of the
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campus
, the lawn and seating area has
been removed
.
However
, the lake experienced no
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changes
.
Additionally
, the shops and restaurant have
been replaced
by a new
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student
accommodation. In the northwest side, the teaching block for art and science has been
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changed
into the
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building
for arts
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only
.
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Because
of that, the science
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building
has
been built
across the road,
therefore
, the university offices
were demolished
.
Next
to it,
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student
accommodation has
been expanded
from two to four
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buildings
.
Lastly
, in the bottom
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left
-hand corner, the
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student
accommodation has
been widened
converted into the
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student
facilities, which provide shops and offices.
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IELTS academic Task 1 - Map: the maps show the development of a university campus

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  American English
3 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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