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Diagram representing the carbon cycle in nature

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The diagram gives us a gist of how a carbon cycle occurs in our nature. First, the energy from the sun is used by plants for performing a process called photosynthesis which produces organic carbon. This organic carbon goes through the underground where there are dead and decayed organisms or waste products converting it into fossils and fossils fuels. Carbon is also given out to space through animals and plants' respiration and also through the burning of the fossil fuel that is being utilized by vehicles and factories. This carbon released is in the form of carbon dioxide. The next day, the entire process starts all over again starting with the plants consuming the energy from the sun. Overall, it is a process that happens daily although human factors may now be affecting the balance of it.
The diagram gives us a gist of how a
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carbon
cycle occurs in our nature.
First
, the energy from the sun is
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used
by plants for performing a process called photosynthesis which produces organic
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carbon
. This organic
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carbon
goes through the underground where there are dead and decayed organisms or waste products converting it into fossils and fossils fuels.

Carbon is
also
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given
out to space through animals and plants' respiration and
also
through the burning of the fossil fuel
that is
being utilized
by vehicles and factories. This
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carbon
released is in the form of
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carbon
dioxide. The
next
day, the entire process
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starts
all over again starting with the plants consuming the energy from the sun.

Overall
, it is a process that happens daily although human factors may
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now
be affecting the balance of it.
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IELTS academic Diagram representing the carbon cycle in nature

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