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The number of travellers using 3 major British airports

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The given table compares the figures for passengers using three main airports in British: Heathrow, Gatwick and Stansted in the 6-year period from 1998 to 2003. From an overall perspective, it can be observed that even though the three figures all have an upward trend, the number of people travel by Gatwick airport each year are the largest for most of the time. The number of travellers using the Gatwick airport in 1998 is 36. 5 million, which was far more than that number of the other airports in the same year. Next, the figure increased considerably to just above 50 million in 2002, after which reached a peak at 69. 3 million in 2003. With regards to the number of people travel by Heathrow airport, it began at 27. 2 million in 1998 and then peaked at 48. 2 million, passed Gatwick airport approximately 4 million in 2000. Subsequently, there was a sharp fall of 15 million between 2000 and 2002 (48. 2 to 33. 2). The figure then increased significantly to 45. 6 in 2003. Analyze the rest of the table, it can be seen that the figure for travellers using Stansted airport started at the lowest point of 17. 3 million in 1998, but rose rapidly to 43. 3 million in 2001. The figure then levelled off in the last three years.
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table compares the
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figures
for passengers using three main
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airports
in British: Heathrow, Gatwick and
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Stansted
in the
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6-year
period from 1998 to 2003. From an
overall
perspective, it can
be observed
that
even though
the three
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figures
all have an upward trend, the
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number
of
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people
travel by Gatwick
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airport
each
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year
are the largest for most of the time.

The
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number
of
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travellers
using the Gatwick
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airport
in 1998 is 36. 5
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million
, which was far more than that
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number
of the other
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airports
in the same
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year
.
Next
, the
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figure
increased
considerably
to
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just
above 50
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million
in 2002, after which reached a peak at 69. 3
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million
in 2003.

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of
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people
travel by Heathrow
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, it began at 27. 2
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million
in 1998 and then peaked at 48. 2
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million
, passed Gatwick
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airport
approximately 4
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million
in 2000.
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, there was a sharp fall of 15
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million
between 2000 and 2002 (48. 2 to 33. 2). The
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figure
then increased
significantly
to 45. 6 in 2003.

Analyze the rest of the table, it can be
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for
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travellers
using
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Stansted
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airport
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started
at the lowest point of 17. 3
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million
in 1998,
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but
rose
rapidly
to 43. 3
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million
in 2001. The
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then levelled off in the last three years.
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IELTS academic The number of travellers using 3 major British airports

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