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The bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. 0AWwB
The given bar graph illustrates the various types of transportation used to proceed from work in the year between 1950 and 1990 in the European city. Overall, Transportation by car showed an increasing trend and transportation by foot witnessed a downward trend. In detail, People of European city prefer bus. it was 18% in the year 1950 and it jumped to 30% in the next 20 decades. After that it dropped to its same position as it was in the 1950. However, Transportation by car dramatically jumped from 5% to 28% in the year 1970 and after that it surged to 40% in the 1990 which was maximum among all others three transportation modes. In the contrary, Conveyance on foot was highest in the beginning as it was 39% and it fell to 17% in the next 20 decades. It was least preferable by the European people in the year 1990(6%). Likewise, transportation by bike was 29% in 1950 after that it dropped in the next 40 decades. It fell from 22% to 7%.
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transportation
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between 1950 and 1990 in the European city.
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Transportation
by car
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transportation
by foot witnessed a downward trend. In detail,
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People
of European city prefer bus.
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year
1950 and it jumped to 30% in the
next
20 decades. After that it dropped to its same position as it was in the 1950.
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,
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Transportation
by car
dramatically
jumped from 5% to 28% in the
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year
1970 and after that it surged to 40% in the 1990 which was maximum among all others three
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transportation
modes. In the contrary, Conveyance on foot was highest in the beginning as it was 39% and it fell to 17% in the
next
20 decades. It was
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preferable by the European
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in the
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1990(6%).
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transportation
by bike was 29% in 1950 after that it dropped in the
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40 decades. It fell from 22% to 7%.

IELTS academic The bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

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