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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. n6b1g
The above bar chart displays how 3 common sectors (electricity generation, transport and industry) contributed to the air pollution level in 4 countries (china, America, japan and Australia). The units are measured as parts per million. Overall, we can observe that china accounted the highest amount of air pollution levels in all three sectors compared to the other countries. In American and japan, we can notice that a specific sector contributed to highest air pollution level and on the other hand, the significantly lowest air pollution level was observed in the country of Australia. Let’s analyze the countries air pollution level sector wise. Transport sector accounted to contribute second most sector to cause air pollution in china by 70 million, japan by 30 million and around 20 million in Australia respectively. In America, it was the sector that caused the highest amount of air pollution which accounted around 60 million. On the other hand, the industry sector was responsible for higher pollution level in china by 80 million and japan with just over 40 million. Followed by America, which accounted a little lower than by 30 million and the least air pollution level through industries was in Australia which is around 18 million. Electricity generation sector caused least amount of air pollution levels in china around 48 million and America by exactly 30 million. Australia was observed to affect the highest by this sector by accounting a little less than 20 million and japan being the least affected by this sector with just over 5 million.
The above bar chart displays how 3 common
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sectors
(electricity generation, transport and industry) contributed to the
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air
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pollution
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level
in 4
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countries
(
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china
, America,
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japan
and Australia). The units
are measured
as parts per million.

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, we can observe that china
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accounted
the highest amount of
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air
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pollution
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levels
in all three
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sectors
compared to the other
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countries
. In American and
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japan
, we can notice that a specific
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sector
contributed to
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air
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pollution
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level
and
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, the
significantly
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lowest
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air
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pollution
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level
was observed
in the
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country
of Australia.

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countries
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air
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level
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sector
wise. Transport
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to contribute second most
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to cause
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china
by 70
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,
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by 30
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air
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which
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around
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was responsible for higher
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in
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china
by 80
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through industries was in Australia which is
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Electricity generation
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caused
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china
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48
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. Australia
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less than 20
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being the least
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