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how fats and oils are made

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The diagram shows how fats and oils are made and shows all the stages of the process, starting from collecting the raw materials and ending with the final product. I will describe all of these nine stages In the beginning, sunflowers, palm oil and nuts, are being collected and transported to silo. There they are being crushed and milled, then the materials are pressed at the same facility. The next stages are done in order to clean the oils and make them edible: they are being filtered and steamed. Coconut oil, sunflower oil and refined oils are being made through this process. These are used to make other edible oils which are then can be found at the supermarket. Overall, the process of making edible oils and fats is an extremely producing. In general, it involves cleaning for the oils to not be harmful for consumption.

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 how fats and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oils
are made
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describe
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In the beginning, sunflowers, palm You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
 and nuts, are being collected
 and transported to silo. There they are being crushed
 and milled, then the materials are pressed
 at the same facility. The next
 stages are done
 in order to clean the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oils
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them edible: they are being filtered
 and steamed. Coconut You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
, sunflower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
 and refined You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oils
 are being made
 through this process. These are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 other edible You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oils
 which are then can be found
 at the supermarket.

Overall
, the process of making edible You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oils
 and fats is an extremely
 producing. In general
, it involves cleaning for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oils
 to not be harmful for consumption. 