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The picture represented above shows how wasted glass bottles are recycled and brought to use again.

The picture represented above shows how wasted glass bottles are recycled and brought to use again. rKN5o
The picture represented above shows how wasted glass bottles are recycled and brought to use again. This process is cyclic and has 11 steps categorized into 3 stages, where every step serves a purpose. In the first stage, the wasted glass bottles are brought to a collection point. Then they are transported to a glass bottle plant. In the second stage, The bottles are then cleaned with high-pressure water jets. Afterwhich they are sorted according to color ie. Clear, green, brown. The sorted bottles are then sent to a glass factory where they shatter the bottles into glass pieces. This helps in increasing the surface area for the next step. Which is to put the glass pieces into a furnace with a temperature of about 600°C to 800°C. This step also removes impurities in the glass, that may have been missed like paper and plastic. The result is recycled liquid glass which is then mixed with new liquid glass and put into a mould. This brings us to the final step, the empty bottles are filled and branded by companies. The bottles are then sent out to the supermarket and are ready for sale.
The picture represented above
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shows
how wasted
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glass
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bottles
are recycled
and brought to
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use
again.

This process is cyclic and has 11
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steps
categorized into 3 stages, where every
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step
serves a purpose.

In the
first
stage, the wasted
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glass
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bottles
are brought
to a collection point. Then they
are transported
to a
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glass
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bottle
plant. In the second stage, The
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bottles
are then cleaned with high-pressure water jets.
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Afterwhich
they
are sorted
according to color
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ie.
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Clear
, green, brown. The sorted
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bottles
are then
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sent
to a
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glass
factory where they shatter the
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bottles
into
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glass
pieces. This
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helps
in increasing the surface area for the
next
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step
.
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Which
is to put the
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glass
pieces into a furnace with a temperature of about
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600°C
to
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800°C
. This
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step
also
removes impurities in the
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glass
, that may have
been missed
like paper and plastic. The result
is recycled
liquid
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glass
which is then mixed with new liquid
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glass
and put into a
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mould
.

This brings us to the final
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step
, the empty
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bottles
are filled
and branded by
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companies
. The
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bottles
are then
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sent
out to the supermarket and are ready for sale.
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IELTS academic The picture represented above shows how wasted glass bottles are recycled and brought to use again.

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5.5
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