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the number of movies in different languages on Netflix

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The bar chart highlights the number of movies in different languages on Netflix. Languages spoken throughout the film include English, Hindi, Spanish, French and other languages. As you can see, English was the most popular language in movies. Across 508 movies studied, 66, 1% featured English as one of their main languages. English is the most widely spoken language worldwide, with 1. 5 billion speakers so there are more people can watch movies. The figure of movies in Hindi and that of Spanish are quite similar with 31 and 30 films. There are about 20 movies in French, almost twice the number of films in Italian and far greater than the number films in Tamil. There are some other languages but they seem unpopular like Polish, Dutch so it’s just a few movies in these language.
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