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The diagram shows the different changes carbon goes through as it is transported from fossil fuel to atmospheric gas and back again. To begin with, carbon, in the form of coal and oil, is extracted from within the earth by mining. After this stage is complete, these fossil fuels are burnt, so as to provide energy for goods manufacturing, the production of electricity, and transport, in fuels such as petrol and diesel. As a result of burning fossil fuels, CO2 is released into the atmosphere, which causes pollution and contributes to global warming. The negative effects of this step in the cycle are balanced by the CO2 being absorbed by trees. Any reduction in trees, caused by forest clearance, reduces CO2 absorption and adds to global warming. The final stage of the process is when trees decay and gradually form back into coal and oil. Once the final stage has been completed, the carbon returns to its original state as a fossil fuel and the cycle continues again

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