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The formation of supervolcanoes.

The formation of supervolcanoes. jV0nX

The diagram indicates how supervolcanoes were formed and each stage in the formation of supervolcanoes. There are four important steps which are shown in the diagram. At the first, there are three main layers. The top which covers the earth is called the surface. Next, the crust is in the middle, and under this layer, it has a layer that contains magma named the mantle. At the beginning of the formation, the magma in the mantle began coming out from the mantle to the crust. Then, there was more magma in the crust. Therefore, it caused a lot of pressure and fissure on the surface. As a result, magma rose up to the surface with smoke and lava, this stage is called eruption. In the end, magma came back to the mantle, and the magma chamber in the crust reduced size because of eruption. Moreover, there was an effect after the eruption, it was land depression which was pushed down by the power of the eruption.

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