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The diagram reveals the stages of how ethanol fuel is produced by corn

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The diagram reveals the stages of how ethanol fuel is produced by corn. There are nine stages; moreover, the diagram begins with corn and ends with transporting. Fourth, fifth, and seventh stage is consumed for many hours, Therefore, the stages of ethanol fuel will take approximately 3 days. Looking at the stage of ethanol fuel, firstly, corn will be storing; furthermore, will be milling and be prepare for cooking for 4 hours. while corn is cooked for a while, water will be added together. In the fourth stage, when corn is done from cooking, it will be ready to fermanting stage, which takes about two days or 48 hours to finish it. Due to the fact that fermanting is took two days, all the stages will take in to separating which means the corn is divided into two groups: liquid and solid by product; However, these two stages will take into purifying ethanol for approximately five hours, then will be storing and transported to be ethanol fuel.
The diagram reveals the
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ethanol
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is produced
by
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corn
. There are nine
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;
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, the diagram
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corn
and ends with transporting. Fourth, fifth, and seventh
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is consumed
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,
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, the
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of
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ethanol
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will take approximately 3 days.

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,
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,
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will be storing;
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for cooking for 4
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while
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is cooked
for a while, water will be
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added
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, when
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is done
from cooking, it will be ready to
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fermanting
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, which takes about two days or 48
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to finish it.

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is
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two days, all the
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will take in to separating which means the
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corn
is divided
into two groups: liquid and solid by product;
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will take into purifying
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ethanol
for approximately five
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, then will be storing and transported to be
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ethanol
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IELTS academic The diagram reveals the stages of how ethanol fuel is produced by corn

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