Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The number of men and women cell phone subscribers in Marysville from 1995 to 2015

The number of men and women cell phone subscribers in Marysville from 1995 to 2015 LlXo3
Given is a graph displaying the number of subscribers to wireless carriers in Marysville from 1995 to 2015. In general, a glance at the chart reveals an upward trend for both groups during the first ten-year period and changed differently in the next decade. As can be seen from the figure, all two genders participated in the cell phone sector at roughly similar levels in 1995, both at about 500 subscribers. The subsequent ten years saw a considerable growth in the number of both male and female cell phone subscribers, with about fivefold its 1995 level, reaching at 2500 people. There was a contradictory trend between the number of male and female subscribers during the next ten-years period. The number of man who utilised cell phone remained stable until 2010 and climbed steadily to the highest point at 2750 subscribers in 2015. However, this was not the case for women's numbers. The number of women using cell phones dropped by a further 200 to approximately 2300 between 2005 and 2010 prior to stabilizing until the end of the year 2015. Overall, while the numbers of both male and female subscribers rose significantly, they rose more for men.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Given
is a graph displaying the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subscribers
to wireless carriers in Marysville from 1995 to 2015.
In general
, a glance at the chart reveals an upward trend for both groups during the
first
ten-year period and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
differently
in the
next
decade. As can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
from the figure, all two genders participated in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cell
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
sector at roughly similar levels in 1995, both at about 500
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subscribers
. The subsequent ten years
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
a considerable growth in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of both male and female
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cell
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subscribers
, with about fivefold its 1995 level, reaching at 2500
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

There was a contradictory trend between the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of male and female
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subscribers
during the
next
ten-years period. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
who
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.
utilised
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cell
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
remained stable until 2010 and climbed
steadily
to the highest point at 2750
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subscribers
in 2015.
However
, this was not the case for women's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
numbers
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of women using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cell
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phones
dropped by a
further
200 to approximately 2300 between 2005 and 2010 prior to stabilizing until the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the year 2015.

Overall
, while the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
numbers
of both male and female
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subscribers
rose
significantly
, they rose more for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The number of men and women cell phone subscribers in Marysville from 1995 to 2015

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
197 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The number of men and women cell phone subscribers in Marysville from 1995 to 2015