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The number of houses built per decade in the towns of farkletown and Newton over the last century.

The number of houses built per decade in the towns of farkletown and Newton over the last century. PRAxX
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the number of houses built per year in two various towns, Farkletown or Newtown, in the previous century. Overall, the number of accommodation built in Newtown had fluctuations in upwardtrend. While, the number of houses built in Farkletown was upward trend. In 1900, The Newtown storey brick houses was built approximately 50 and It was grew up 60 in 1910. The Newtown contraction was upward trend with some minor fluctuations. However, the number of accommodation built was gradually increased from 1920 to 1950. Noticeably, the highest houses built maybe 260 in 1990 at Newtown. Moving towards, the construction of bangllows in Farkletown which was upward trend during 1900 to 1990. Nextly, the number of houses contractions stay steadly between 1930 and 1970. Although, it was suddenly boost up from 120 houses in 1970 to almost 350 accommodation in 1990. Subsequently, the Farkletown's bangllows built was higher than the Newtown accommodation.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the
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built per year in two various towns,
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Farkletown
or
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Newtown
, in the previous century.

Overall
, the
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accommodation
built in
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Newtown
had fluctuations in
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upwardtrend
.
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, the
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built in
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Farkletown
was upward trend.

In 1900, The
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Newtown
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storey
brick
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houses
was built
approximately 50 and It was
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grew
up 60 in 1910. The
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Newtown
contraction was upward trend with
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some
minor fluctuations.
However
, the
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accommodation
built was
gradually
increased from 1920 to 1950.
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, the highest
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houses
built maybe 260 in 1990 at
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Newtown
.

Moving towards, the construction of
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bangllows
in
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Farkletown
which was upward trend during 1900 to 1990.
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Nextly
, the
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houses
contractions stay
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steadly
between 1930 and 1970.
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suddenly
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boost
up from 120
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houses
in 1970 to almost 350
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accommodation
in 1990.
Subsequently
, the
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Farkletown
's
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bangllows
built was higher than the
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Newtown
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IELTS academic The number of houses built per decade in the towns of farkletown and Newton over the last century.

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