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the number of fishers in different regions.

the number of fishers in different regions. QRay9
Presented for consideration are bar charts and a table detailing figures for the number of fishermen in millions for various regions through 1970, 1980 and 2000. Overall, the number of fishers in Asia was the highest in the world. To begin with 1970, the fishermen lived in Asia approximately 9 million. Close behind was Africa with 1. 3 million, while South America’s fishers come third with 1. 2 million, a slight difference compared to Africa. Lastly, North America and Europe were two countries with the lowest numbers of fishers with around 0. 5 million and 0. 6 million respectively. In 1980, compared to 1970, the figure of fishermen in Asia, Africa, and North America rose dramatically. On the other hand, the number in Europe declined slightly. Especially, South American fishers remained constant at over 1. 2 million. Similarly, there was a difference between 1980 and 2000, the figures for Africa, South America, North America stayed the same. By constant, Asia’s fishermen gown enormously with roughly 24 million. Over the same period, the number of fishers in Europe climbed up to nearly 0. 6 million. Regarding the table, the order of the world’s top ten exporters of fish in 2000 was ranked from the highest to the lowest position as follows Thailand, Norway, USA, China, Denmark, Canada, Taiwan, Russia, Indonesia, and South Korea.
Presented for consideration are bar charts and a table detailing figures for the
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for various regions through 1970, 1980 and 2000.
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, the
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of
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fishers
in Asia was the highest in the world. To
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lived
in Asia approximately 9
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. Close behind was Africa with 1. 3
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million
, while South America’s
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fishers
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third with 1. 2
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, a slight difference compared to Africa.
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, North America and Europe were two countries with the lowest
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with around 0. 5
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and 0. 6
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million
respectively
. In 1980, compared to 1970, the figure of
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in Asia, Africa, and North America rose
dramatically
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On the other hand
, the
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in Europe declined
slightly
.
Especially
, South American
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remained constant at over 1. 2
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, there was a difference between 1980 and 2000, the figures for Africa, South America, North America stayed the same. By constant, Asia’s
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gown
enormously
with roughly 24
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. Over the same period, the
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in Europe climbed up to
nearly
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million
. Regarding the table, the order of the world’s top ten exporters of fish in 2000
was ranked
from the highest to the lowest position as follows Thailand, Norway, USA, China, Denmark, Canada, Taiwan, Russia, Indonesia, and South Korea.
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