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Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about a dramatic accident /incident. It can be true or imaginary.

Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about a dramatic accident /incident. It can be true or imaginary. kWKR8

My grandfather had an accident two years ago. It happened on a time morning when he did exercise by his bike. He drove very slow and prepare to turn but there was a motorbike coming and crashed to my grandfather. After that, he felt dizzy breathless and very hurt in his left leg. The man in the motorbike went to my grandfather to check what was wrong. The man was quickly walked to he and first aid for him because his left leg was broken and couldn’t move. Then he was admitted to hospital. The man who cashed his motorbike into my grandfather was very worried and called my family. After 15 minutes, my uncle and my grandmother went to hospital. Luckily, if not get first aid in time, he would have been danger to life. After a few weeks, he couldn’t do anything with his leg so he felt terrible. But now, he is fine and can do exercise.

My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withancestorpatriarchgrandpa
grandfather
 had an accident two years ago. It happened on a time morning when he did exercise by his bike. He drove This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 slow and prepare to turn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there was a motorbike coming and crashed to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withancestorpatriarchgrandpa
grandfather
. After that, he felt dizzy breathless and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 hurt in his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 leg. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 in the motorbike went to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withancestorpatriarchgrandpa
grandfather
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 what was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 was quickly
 walked to he and first
 aid for him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 leg was broken
 and couldn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
. Then he was admitted
 to hospital. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 who cashed his motorbike into my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withancestorpatriarchgrandpa
grandfather
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 worried and called my family. After 15 minutes, my uncle and my grandmother went to hospital. Luckily, if not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
first
 aid in time, he would have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardrisk
danger
 to life. After a few weeks, he couldn’t do anything with his leg This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 he felt terrible. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, he is fine and can do exercise. 