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Television and Computers per 1000 people The graph shows the mumber of televisions and computers per 1000 es, for selected countries. Overail, as might be expected, most of the countries inchuded in the gaph have more televisions than computers The number of televisions varies greatly between countries. The biggest audience for television is the Americans, with 750 televisions per 1000 people. In contrast, in the Philippines, there are only 20 televisions for every 1000 people. The figures for the numbers of televisions in Sweden, France and the UK are simitar, at between 500 and 600 sets per 1000 people In almost all countries, the number of PCs is lower than the number of televisions. The biggest gaps are in France and Saudi Arabia. France has twice as many televisions as computers, and in Saudi Arabia, there are 200 televisions per 1000 people compared to just 50 PCs. In contrast, in Sweden, the number of computers, at 500, is almost the same as the figure for televisions. South Korea is very unusual because it has slightly more computers than televisions, at 400 compared to just 350 televisions In conclusion, it seems that although there are big differences between countries, computers are still much less common than televisions in most countries.
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