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the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.write anything

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The table gives some data about the amount of the male and female workers and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Overall, the show of the male and female workers was dropping dramatically from 1851 to1901 and this situation can affect the general number. In addition, the number of factories decreased (the last decade). With regards to men and women, the high rate of the statistic was illustrated in 1851 with 287100, also this situation happened in the female employees with 190000. The minimum index occurred in 1901 both male and female employees ( 31000 and 30000 respectively). The index of the female workers in 1871 was twice as much than in 1901 year. In terms of the total employees and factories, the pointers of factories both 1851 and 1861 years were relatively similar, nevertheless the minimum number belonged to 1851 with 225, the same situation was pointed out in 1871 and 1891 years (622 and 625 respectively). The maximum show was shown with 721 factories in 1881. Finally, the top level of the total show happened in 1851 just above 477000, in contrast the least occurred in 1901 with 61000
The table gives
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data about the amount of the male and
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workers and
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factories
in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Overall
, the
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show
of the male and
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workers was dropping
dramatically
from 1851 to1901 and this situation can affect the general number.
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, the number of
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factories
decreased (the last decade).

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and women, the high rate of the statistic
was illustrated
in 1851 with 287100,
also
this situation happened in the
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female
employees with 190000. The minimum index occurred in 1901 both male and
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female
employees
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(
31000 and 30000
respectively
). The index of the
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workers in 1871 was twice as
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than
in 1901 year.

In terms of the total employees and
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factories
, the pointers of
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factories
both 1851 and 1861 years were
relatively
similar,
nevertheless
the minimum number belonged to 1851 with 225, the same situation
was pointed
out in 1871 and 1891 years (622 and 625
respectively
). The maximum
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show
was shown
with 721
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factories
in 1881.
Finally
, the
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top level
of the total
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show
happened in 1851
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above 477000,
in contrast
the least occurred in 1901 with 61000
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IELTS academic the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. write anything

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