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The given pie charts illustrate the information on comparison of exported goods of 5 categories in Great Britain over 5 years between 2010 and 2015.

The given pie charts illustrate the information on comparison of exported goods of 5 categories in Great Britain over 5 years between 2010 and 2015. 6xKgx
The given pie charts illustrate the information on comparison of exported goods of 5 categories in Great Britain over 5 years between 2010 and 2015. Overall, besides pharmaceuticals, all other exported goods seem to have increased percentages for the given time period and exportation of Great Britain mainly consisted of machinery, vehicles and phramaceuticals throughout the given time frame. It can clearly be observed that, the vast majority of exported products seem to be machinery and vehicles with approximately one-third of all both in 2010 and 2015, moreover both of these categories saw only 1% increase over the given period. On the other hand, organic chemicals occur to have the least rates for both years with 7% and 10% respectively in 2010 and 2015 and their export rates went up by 3% over 5 years. Interestingly, Pharmaceuticals experienced a decrease of 9% over the given time frame, however the percentage of exported plastic products went up from 9% in 2010 to 13% in 2015.
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5 years between 2010 and 2015.

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,
besides
pharmaceuticals, all other
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exported
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goods
seem to have increased percentages for the
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time period and exportation of Great Britain
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phramaceuticals
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time frame.

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products seem to be machinery and vehicles with approximately one-third of all both in 2010 and 2015,
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both of these categories
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1% increase
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period.
On the other hand
, organic chemicals occur to have the least rates for both years with 7% and 10%
respectively
in 2010 and 2015 and their export rates went up by 3%
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5 years.

Interestingly
, Pharmaceuticals experienced a decrease of 9%
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plastic products went up from 9% in 2010 to 13% in 2015.
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IELTS academic The given pie charts illustrate the information on comparison of exported goods of 5 categories in Great Britain over 5 years between 2010 and 2015.

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