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The charts below show the percentages of films shown in UK and Australia in 2001 as well as the number of cinema admissions from 1976 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentages of films shown in UK and Australia in 2001 as well as the number of cinema admissions from 1976 to 2006. OVw0E
The bar charts illustrates the information on the origin of movies which were screened on Australia and United Kimdom in 2001 while line graph makes comparison of the number cinema admissions in 1976 and 2006. In brief the film's share was mainly dominated by the USA movie industries, as well as attendants in Britain went to theatre were more than the Australia counterparts between 1975 and 2005. Firt of all, United States film accounted for over 75% of the UK cinema market and approximately 70 % of the Australian market. 20% of films were made in Britain locally compared to almost 10% in Australia. Secondly, one in ten produced in Australia screened in the UK but fewer Australia made movies in the local as there was virtually nail proportions. It is clearly show that more Britishs attend to theatre than people who did in Australia between 1976 and 2005. In 1975, over 100 million UK people watched movies contrary to 30 million people in Australia. The number Australian reached over 80 million after 3 decades, although the over all trend with fluctuation. British cinema attendees decreased from 1977 to 1984, but afterwards steadily increased. After 30 years, nearly 160 million British went to cinema which is a doubling number than that of Australians.
The bar charts
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illustrates
the information on the origin of
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movies
which
were screened
on Australia and United
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Kimdom
in 2001 while line graph
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makes
comparison of the number
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cinema
admissions in 1976 and 2006.

In brief
the film's share was
mainly
dominated by the USA
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movie
industries,
as well
as attendants in Britain went to
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theatre
were more than the Australia counterparts between 1975 and 2005.

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Firt
of all, United States film accounted for
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over
75% of the UK
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cinema
market and approximately 70 % of the Australian market. 20% of films
were made
in Britain
locally
compared to almost 10% in Australia.
Secondly
, one in ten produced in Australia screened in the UK
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but
fewer Australia made
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movies
in the local as there was
virtually
nail proportions.

It is
clearly
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show
that more
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Britishs
attend to
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theatre
than
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people
who did in Australia between 1976 and 2005. In 1975,
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over
100
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million
UK
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people
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watched
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movies
contrary to 30
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million
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people
in Australia. The number Australian reached
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over
80
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million
after 3 decades, although the
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over
all trend with fluctuation. British
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cinema
attendees decreased from 1977 to 1984,
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but
afterwards
steadily
increased. After 30 years,
nearly
160
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million
British went to
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cinema
which is a doubling number than that of Australians.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentages of films shown in UK and Australia in 2001 as well as the number of cinema admissions from 1976 to 2006.

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