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The new york city's airports between 1995 and 2000

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The chart displays the quantity of travellers in New York City through three major airports, throughout the course of six years, between 1995 and 2000. Looking from an overall perspective, at the first glance, it is clear that there was a fluctuation trend in the aggregate of visitors travelled via JonnF. Kennedy airport. In the meantime, others were gradually on the rise. Indeed, it should be noted that LaGuardia airport was the most well-known at the final year. In the year 1995, the airport that experienced the lowest point of visitors was Newark, made up approximately 15m. In the same year, the airport which was in great request of visitors was LaGuardia (35m) whereas JohnF. Kennedy airport experienced 25m of guests. In the next year, the number of visitors used Newark airport rose markedly (25m)Nevertheless, visitors using John Kennedy airport escalated to 35m from 25m in the past year. Also, LaGuardia airport constituted 40m of travellers in the year 1996. In 1997, all three airports Witnessed an increase of visitors. Interestingly, this year JohnF. Kennedy airport was well-liked by visitors and was 47m. In fact, not only the number of travellers LaGuardia airport surged up to 44m but also Newark airport's visitors climbed rapidly to 39m. It is interesting to note that the use of Newark airport remained relatively stable in the last three years. Moreover, popularity of JohnF Kennedy airport decreased dramatically to 36m as compare to the previous year and, in 1999, the figure dipped to 32m. At the last year, there was a slight growth to 44m. Furthermore, LaGuardia airport experienced a rise of travellers year on year and in 2000, reached a peak, accounted for 68m
The chart displays the quantity of
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travellers
in New York City through three major
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airports
, throughout the course of six years, between 1995 and 2000.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, at the
first
glance, it is
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clear
that there was a fluctuation trend in the aggregate of
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visitors
travelled via
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JonnF
. Kennedy
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airport
. In the meantime, others were
gradually
on the rise.
Indeed
, it should
be noted
that LaGuardia
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airport
was the most well-known at the final year.

In the
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year
1995, the
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airport
that experienced the lowest point of
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visitors
was Newark, made up approximately
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15m
. In the same
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year
, the
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airport
which was in great request of
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visitors
was LaGuardia (
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35m
) whereas
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JohnF
. Kennedy
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airport
experienced
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25m
of guests. In the
next
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year
, the number of
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visitors
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used
Newark
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airport
rose
markedly
(
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25m
)
Nevertheless
,
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visitors
using John Kennedy
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airport
escalated to
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35m
from
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25m
in the past
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year
.
Also
, LaGuardia
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airport
constituted
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40m
of
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travellers
in the
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year
1996. In 1997, all three
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airports
Witnessed an increase of
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visitors
.
Interestingly
, this
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year
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JohnF
. Kennedy
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airport
was well-liked by
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visitors
and was
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47m
. In fact, not
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only
the number of
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travellers
LaGuardia
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airport
surged up to
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44m
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but
also
Newark airport's
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visitors
climbed
rapidly
to
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39m
.

It is interesting to note that the
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use
of Newark
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airport
remained
relatively
stable in the last three years.
Moreover
, popularity of
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JohnF
Kennedy
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airport
decreased
dramatically
to
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36m
as compare to the previous
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year
and, in 1999, the figure dipped to
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32m
. At the last
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year
, there was a slight growth to
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44m
.
Furthermore
, LaGuardia
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airport
experienced a rise of
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travellers
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year
on
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year
and in 2000, reached a peak, accounted for
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68m
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IELTS academic The new york city's airports between 1995 and 2000

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