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Al Gore- The case for optimism in climate change

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Al Gore presents the issues of climate change and then he points out 3 questions that are related to the changes that are happening today. First of all, the sources of greenhouse gases come from almost every human activity such as extracting coals, burning crops or forests, toxic emissions from factories, and smoke from the transport engines. These toxic wastes and smoke emitted increased the carbon dioxide in the air. He compares the energy trapped by man-made global warming pollution equal to the exploding of 400, 000 bombs in Hiroshima. The evidence of climate change over a period of time is shown significantly in the line graphs which indicate the Earth getting warmer over time. Furthermore, 2015 is one of the hottest years recorded which had an effect on animals, plants, people, and ecosystems. Besides, as the temperatures get higher, the oceans evaporate more moisture into the skies, therefore the ordinary humidity rate also climbed up four percent which makes possible conditions for storms and other natural hazards like floods and mudslides. In addition, another consequence of climate change is drought which destroyed most of the farms, killed much livestock, and many people leave because of drought. Moreover,

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