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The given diagram shows the difference between a city named denham . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram shows the difference between a city named denham. 1AbkM
The given maps illustrates information about the changes occur in a city Denham from the year 1986 to 2016. It is crystal clear that there are various changes in both the pictorials. In 1986, South of the city there was a farmland for cows which was replaced by houses. Coming to the North, the two shops were transformed into homes. One more Farmyard which was in north was also changed into homes. Going further, place for primary school remain unchanged. However, the space for it increases a bit. A garden with large house and trees is visible in 1986 and in 2016 it was transformed to retirement home with some trees. The place which was empty to the south of the park, the houses were built to consume this space. As well as some new roads were also built so that the city stay connected. The river and bridge remain unchanged and can be seen the same in both the pictures.
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occur in a city
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Denham
from the year 1986 to 2016.

It is crystal
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clear
that there are various
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changes
in both the pictorials. In 1986, South of the city there was a farmland for cows which
was replaced
by
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houses
. Coming to the North, the two shops
were transformed
into homes. One more Farmyard which was in north was
also
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changed
into homes.

Going
further
, place for primary school remain unchanged.
However
, the space for it increases a bit. A garden with large
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house
and trees is visible in 1986 and in 2016 it
was transformed
to retirement home with
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some
trees. The place which was empty to the south of the park, the
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houses
were built
to consume this space.
As well
as
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some
new roads were
also
built
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so
that the city stay connected. The river and bridge remain unchanged and can be
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seen
the same in both the pictures.

IELTS academic The given diagram shows the difference between a city named denham.

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