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The chart illustrates the exports earning for five different sectors for the year of 2015 and 2016. Meanwhile, the table compares the percentage change for each sector for the said years.

The chart illustrates the exports earning for five different sectors for the year of 2015 and 2016. Meanwhile, the table compares the percentage change for each sector for the said years. eAwwx
The chart illustrates the exports earning for five different sectors for the year of 2015 and 2016. Meanwhile, the table compares the percentage change for each sector for the said years. Overall, each categories have experienced growth during 2016, the textile sector being the highest and the agricultural products being the lowest. Meanwhile, the Gems and jewelry has has undergone a small decline in 2016. Petroleum products sector has a slight increase of 3% in 2016. In the meantime, engineered goods has shown comparatively better growth with a 8. 5% increase, which is also the second highest growth among all the categories. While agricultural products has experienced the lowest growth among all the sectors with only 0. 81% increase, the Textile sector has shown the highest growth, with a remarkable increase of 15. 24%. However, the Gems and jewelry failed to keep up with the growth of other sectors. Rather, it has experienced a noticeable decrease with a 5. 18% drop.
The chart illustrates the exports earning for five
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for the year of 2015 and 2016. Meanwhile, the table compares the percentage
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for each
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for the said years.

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being the highest and the agricultural products being the lowest. Meanwhile, the Gems and jewelry
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Petroleum products
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has a slight
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of 3% in 2016. In the meantime, engineered
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has shown the highest
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