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the maps the change of pentland from 1980 and 2007

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The maps illustrate the change that have taken place of pentland between 1980and 2007. Overall, the layout of the Pentland has been significantly changed many shops and houses were built right hand-side of pentland in 2007. In1980, Pentland has many space place, Park was built on the left-side in 2007. Industrial area has been changed to multistory park. Addationally, swimming pool has been constucted eastern part of pentland in 2007. Cinima was built rare - corner of city. Roads have run through centre city and this has been remaining unchanged. Sea was extended in 2007. Block of the flat and many shops were built in western part of pentland, and car park was demolished in 2007. Futhermore, the grassland was southern part of city was be replaced by houses.
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change
that have taken place of
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pentland
between 1980and 2007.
Overall
, the layout of the
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Pentland
has been
significantly
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changed
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many
shops and
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houses
were built
right hand-side of
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pentland
in 2007. In1980,
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Pentland
has
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many
space place, Park
was built
on the
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left
-side in 2007. Industrial area has been
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changed
to multistory park.
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Addationally
, swimming pool has been
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constucted
eastern part of
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pentland
in 2007.
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Cinima
was built
rare
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corner of city. Roads have run through
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centre
city and this has been remaining unchanged. Sea
was extended
in 2007. Block of the flat and
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many
shops
were built
in western part of
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pentland
, and car park
was demolished
in 2007.
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Futhermore
, the grassland was southern part of city was
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be
replaced by
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houses
.
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