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The map illustrates the changes that have taken place in a Fishing village from

The map illustrates the changes that have taken place in a Fishing village from BlMM6

Overall, the lay out of the village has been significantly changed. A number of buildings have been renovated and converted it has also been added a number of areas in the some side of Fishing villageIn 1974 there was forest area on the right corner of Fishing village and it has also been changed to golf course in the 2004. Hotels is in the rare-corner of Fishing village in 2003, but it has been children's area in1974. By the same taken between hotels and original village have been added to the beach in 2004. In 1974 there was harbour in the sea, however it has been renovated to the original village. Olives has been demolished in the 2004 and it has been constructed to the farmlands. (fruit, vegetables for hotels)In the remaining village tourist shops has been opened in 2004 and long road has been converted passes through to the condominium. In 2004 sheep, goats and home of locals beach has been constructed in 2004 respectively

Overall
, the lay out of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 has been significantly
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changed
. A number of buildings have been renovated
 and converted it has also
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added
 a number of areas in the Did you mean "same"?same
some
 side of Fishing Possible spelling mistake found.village In
villageIn
 1974 there was forest area on the right corner of Fishing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 and it has also
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changed
 to golf course in the 2004. Hotels You should probably use: "are" or "were".arewere
is
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village
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but
 it has been children's area in1974. By the same taken between hotels and original You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
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added
 to the beach in 2004. In 1974 there was Possible spelling mistake. 'harbour' is British English.harbor
harbour
 in the sea, however
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 to the original You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
. Olives has been demolished
 in the 2004 and it has been constructed
 to the farmlands. (fruit, vegetables for hotels)In the remaining You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 tourist shops has been opened
 in 2004 and long road has been converted
 passes through to the condominium. In 2004 sheep, goats and home of locals beach has been constructed
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