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hydroelectric power genration

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The process diagram illustrate how the hydroelectric power is generate. The first step of the process is the sea water heated and evaporate then become clouds. The last stage of the diagram is the supply of the power to the residential area like, schools, hospitals. To begin with, the sea water is heated by the sun and it evaporate. The result is, the evaporated water become cloud. In the next step, the rain is fall down inside the reservoir. Reservoir is use to store water. there is a dam. By switching the valve on, the water is ruin down towards the land. The force of the water run the turbine and using the high voltage cable, the power is then transform to the station where the hydroelectric power is distributed via the underground cables to the residential/industrial area. An extra point to note, pump function is to pass the some of the water back to the reservoir so it can be save the water.

The process diagram illustrate how the hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 is Consider using a past participle here: "generated".generated
generate
. The first
 step of the process is the sea You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 heated and evaporate then become clouds. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 last stage of the diagram is the supply of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 to the residential area like, schools, hospitals.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the sea You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is heated
 by the sun and it Did you mean "evaporates"?evaporates
evaporate
. The result is, the evaporated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 become cloud. In the next
 step, the rain is fall down inside the reservoir. Reservoir is Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
 store You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 is a dam. By switching the valve on, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is ruin down towards the land. The force of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 run the turbine and using the high voltage cable, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 is then transform to the station where the hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
is distributed
 via the underground cables to the residential/industrial area.

An extra point to note, pump function is to pass the If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 back to the reservoir This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it can be The word "save" is a verb. Did you mean the adjective "safe"?safe
save
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. 