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process diagram of the brickes

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The process diagram illustrate the production of bricks. There are total six steps. The first step start with clay digging and end with the packaging. The process of brick production is start by digging. The clay is dig by the digger from the landfill. Then, the dig clay is transfer to the metal grid where, the small pieces of clay is separated from the metal grid with the help of the roller. After then sand and water are added to the clay. Next, the mixture is placing in either mould or wire cutter and the bricks are set into the shape. In the next step, the bricks are set into the drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. The bricks are then set to the cooling chamber at different temperature. First it is put for moderate temperature which is 200 to 980 Celsius inside the kin. Further, it is cool down at the high temperature which is 870 to 1300 Celsius. It is cool down in the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. At last stage, it is ready for packaging and transfer via the vehicle to the delivery sport.
The process diagram illustrate the production of
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bricks
. There are total six steps. The
first
step
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start
with
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clay
digging and
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end
with the packaging.

The process of
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brick
production is
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start
by digging.
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The
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clay
is dig by the digger from the landfill. Then, the dig
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clay
is transfer to the metal grid where, the
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small
pieces of
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clay
is separated
from the metal grid with the
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help
of the roller. After then sand and water are
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added
to the
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clay
.
Next
, the mixture is placing in either
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mould
or wire cutter and the
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bricks
are set
into the shape.

In the
next
step, the
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bricks
are set
into the drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. The
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bricks
are then set to the cooling chamber at
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different
temperature.
First
it
is put
for moderate temperature which is 200 to 980 Celsius inside the kin.
Further
, it is cool down at the high temperature which is 870 to 1300 Celsius. It is cool down in the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours.

At last stage, it is ready for packaging and transfer via the vehicle to the delivery sport.
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IELTS academic process diagram of the brickes

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  American English
4 paragraphs
191 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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