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The maps shows the university sports courst in 1990 and now.

The maps shows the university sports courst in 1990 and now. WqP9N

The provided maps detail the information about the variatiins which were faced by a university sports courts in 1990 and now. It is crystal clear from the maps that cafe and reception area's are still exista at there prior place; however, outdoor pool which was situated behind those area's in 1990 has changed into indoor pool at same place. A park which was located in West side of the sports courts in 1990 is replaced by a basketball court. Turning to the remaining information, the position of car park now has replaced by tennis court. Changing room was located beneath the reception in 1990, but in present it is positioned separately with additional building of fitness centre at the place of tennis court. Overall, except cafe and reception there are number of alterations has faced by university sports courts structure.

The provided maps detail the information about the Possible spelling mistake found.variations
variatiins
 which were faced
 by a university sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
 in 1990 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

It is crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the maps that 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and reception Consider using the plural form here: "areas".areas
area's
 are still
Possible spelling mistake found.existexistsexist a
exista
 at there prior place; however
, outdoor pool which was situated
 behind Did you mean "this area" or "those areas"?this areathose areas
those area
's in 1990 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into indoor pool at same place. A park which was located
 in West side of the sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
 in 1990 is replaced
 by a basketball court.

Turning to the remaining information, the position of car park This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 has replaced by tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
. Changing room was located
 beneath the reception in 1990, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in present it is positioned
separately
 with additional building of fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 at the place of tennis court.

Overall
, except 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and reception there are number of alterations has faced by university sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
 structure. 

IELTS academic The maps shows the university sports courst in 1990 and now.

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American English

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140 words

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