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The maps shows the university sports courst in 1990 and now.

The maps shows the university sports courst in 1990 and now. WqP9N
The provided maps detail the information about the variatiins which were faced by a university sports courts in 1990 and now. It is crystal clear from the maps that cafe and reception area's are still exista at there prior place; however, outdoor pool which was situated behind those area's in 1990 has changed into indoor pool at same place. A park which was located in West side of the sports courts in 1990 is replaced by a basketball court. Turning to the remaining information, the position of car park now has replaced by tennis court. Changing room was located beneath the reception in 1990, but in present it is positioned separately with additional building of fitness centre at the place of tennis court. Overall, except cafe and reception there are number of alterations has faced by university sports courts structure.
The provided maps detail the information about the
variatiins
which
were faced
by a university sports
courts
in 1990 and
now
.

It is crystal
clear
from the maps that
cafe
and reception
area's
are
still
exista
at there prior place;
however
, outdoor pool which
was situated
behind
those area
's in 1990 has
changed
into indoor pool at same place. A park which
was located
in West side of the sports
courts
in 1990
is replaced
by a basketball court.

Turning to the remaining information, the position of car park
now
has replaced by tennis
court
. Changing room
was located
beneath the reception in 1990,
but
in present it
is positioned
separately
with additional building of fitness
centre
at the place of tennis court.

Overall
, except
cafe
and reception there are number of alterations has faced by university sports
courts
structure.
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IELTS academic The maps shows the university sports courst in 1990 and now.

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