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the maps shows the construction took place in island and how it looks like at present than before.

the maps shows the construction took place in island and how it looks like at present than before. Kn8J6
The maps illustrate the blue print of an island that demonstrated bulk of changes that took place namely the restaurant, accomodations etc. Similarly, there was enough vacant space and no facilities were provided there. It was covered with trees on the West and East direction. While, at present they made a pier on the southernmost part of the island for providing access to island. Besides this, reception was present in the middle of the island which was connected to pier through a track. Also, on the top northern side of the island, the restaurant was constructed for providing food to tourists. Moreover, on either side of the reception there residential area was built for providing rest to tourists. After that, the vegetation area was present as prior and this remained unscathered. On the other hand, the beach on the Western area of island remained unchanged. Only the swimming pool was established for fun activities at that area. Overall, there was an huge transformation took place in island for providing efficient leisure facilities to the tourists.
The maps illustrate the blue print of an
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island
that demonstrated bulk of
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changes
that took place
namely
the restaurant,
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accomodations
etc.

Similarly
, there was
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enough
vacant space and no facilities
were provided
there. It
was covered
with trees on the West and East direction. While, at present they made a pier on the southernmost part of the
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island
for providing access to
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island
.
Besides
this, reception was present in the middle of the
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island
which
was connected
to pier through a
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track
.
Also
, on the top northern side of the
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island
, the restaurant
was constructed
for providing food to tourists.

Moreover
, on either side of the reception there residential area
was built
for providing rest to tourists. After that, the vegetation area was present as prior and this remained
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unscathered
.
On the other hand
, the beach on the Western area of
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island
remained unchanged.
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Only
the swimming pool
was established
for fun activities at that area.

Overall
, there was
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an
huge transformation took place in
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island
for providing efficient leisure facilities to the tourists.
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