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Comparison of average ages of men and women who visited movie theatres during 2012

Comparison of average ages of men and women who visited movie theatres during 2012 eerRV

The graph provides the information about males and females between 14 and 50 or more who are intrested in going to movie. The data is taken with average numbers of five different groups. The provided groups are 14-17, 18-24, 25-34, 35-49 and morethan 50 years old. Overall, proportion of different genders are nearly same with their respective group. Firstly, women aged between 14-17 years are the least intrested to go for a cinema with 7%. The trend had increased gradually and peaked at 33% for 50 plus years old. Moving to second group that is 18-24 years had more than double the first one with 15%. Following next two groups inflated with 5% reaching 25% for women aged between 35 and 49 years. Further, Women aged 50 and more occupied ##% which morethan anyone in graph. Secondly, men have more tendency toward movies than because as from given data. Either they have shown more or equal average number of visits except for the last group. For first and fourth group they have shown equal portion. Moreover, In the case of 18-24 and 25-34 age period the percentage had soared by 15 and 3%. Lastly, men had 4% lessthan the women in 50 and more age.

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