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Describe line graph below during 2003-2012 in Newport.

Describe line graph below during 2003-2012 in Newport. 1a9aW

The graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Newport inner city during the period 2003-2012. we can see immediately that the greater changes occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of theft remained low but steady. In 2003, we can see that burglary was the most common crime, with approximately 3, 400 reported cases. The figure rose to around 3, 700 in 2014, but then there was a downward trend until 2008. At this point, the figure stood at just over 1, 000 incidents. This rose slightly in 2009, then continued to fluctuate for the reaming period. In 2003, the number of cars being stolen stood at around 2, 800 and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2006. At this point the number rose, standing at around 2, 200 in 2007. There was a marginal decrease in the following year, but from then on the trend was generally upwards.

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 in 2009, then continued to fluctuate for the reaming period.

In 2003, the number of cars being stolen
 stood at around 2, 800 and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2006. At this point the number rose, standing at around 2, 200 in 2007. There was a marginal decrease in the following year, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 from then on the trend was generally
 upwards. 