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The table shows the proportion of money spend by different age group people in the UK in 1998 on four different items.

The table shows the proportion of money spend by different age group people in the UK in 1998 on four different items. 25kKk
The table depicts the information about percentage of money spend on food, electricity equipment, music and video by adults, men, women, children, boys and girls in the UK in 1998. It can be clearly seen that girls spend higher expensive over music. Taking a closer look, adult consumed over food were 25 percent and on electronic equipment and music were equal which were 5 percent and just 1 percent spend over videos. Women were interested towards food and electronic equipment were 14 percent and 10 percent. Music interest of men and adults were same. Men buy vedios while spending 2 percent. Plethora of income spend on food by women (39 percent) vedios earn were half of electricity equipment money spend of women. Music recommend by women were 5 percent. Coming toward other age group. Foods and videos were approximately same by the children spended. Therefore, electronic devices and music were consumed by children were 23 percent and 12 percent. Boys were use the amount of money over food were half of electronic equipment and video were 9 percent over 18 percent. And music consumed money were 20 percent than other three items. Comes over opposite gender music settle 8 time more than electronic equipment. Food and videos discern were 11 percent and 17 percent. To wrap up, women and adults manifest the huge amount of interest toward food than other items.
The table depicts the information about percentage of
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, electricity
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music
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women
, children, boys and girls in the UK in 1998.

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that girls
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higher expensive
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music
. Taking a closer look, adult consumed
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food
were 25
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percent
and on
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electronic
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equipment
and
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music
were equal which were 5
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percent
and
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percent
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videos
.
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Women
were interested
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and
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electronic
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equipment
were 14
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percent
and 10
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percent
.
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interest of
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and
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adults
were same.
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Men
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buy
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vedios
while spending 2
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percent
. Plethora of income
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women
(39
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vedios
earn were half of electricity
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women
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Music
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by
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women
were 5
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percent
. Coming toward other age group.
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and
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videos
were approximately same by the children
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.
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,
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devices and
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were consumed
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and 12
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. Boys were
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were half of
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consumed
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were 20
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than other three items.
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opposite gender
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music
settle 8 time more than
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electronic
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equipment
.
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and
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discern were 11
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and 17 percent.

To wrap up,
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women
and
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manifest the huge amount of interest toward
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than other items.
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IELTS academic The table shows the proportion of money spend by different age group people in the UK in 1998 on four different items.

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