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compare two maps between 1948 and 2010

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The given two illustrations show the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010. Overall, in the maps show there are several facilities changed in 62 years and also many commercial buildings pop up in the town, while there is no any commercial building back in 1948 yet. Regarding the provided map from 1948, there was a industrial area at north-east side of the town, however in 2010 all the factories have removed away and then builded a new airport. In 2010, the super market has moved closer to the main residential zone and surrounded the supermarket there are many commercial buildings be constructed in entire north-west side of the town. Additionally, the church at the south side of the town which beside the river has been replaced by a new sports stadium in 2010. Before, there were two part of residential houses area one at the west side of the river and one located at the east side, in 2010 only the east side residential area remained the same.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 two illustrations This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in an American You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 between 1948 and 2010.

Overall
, in the maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 there are several facilities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in 62 years and also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 commercial buildings pop up in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
, while there is Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 any commercial building back in 1948 yet
.

Regarding the provided map from 1948, there was Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 industrial area at north-east side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
, however
 in 2010 all the factories have removed away and then Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "built", the past tense form of the verb 'build'?builtbuilder
builded
 a new airport.

In 2010, the super market has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 closer to the main residential zone and surrounded the supermarket there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 commercial buildings be constructed
 in entire north-west side of the town.

Additionally
, the church at the south side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 which beside the river has been replaced
 by a new sports stadium in 2010. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
, there were two part of residential This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 area one at the west side of the river and one located at the east side, in 2010 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the east side residential area remained the same. 