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The two maps illustrate the main development which has taken place in Stoleford’s village during a period of 80 years. Overall, it seems that the village has been modernised because the large number of houses increased dramatically while the farmland vanished completely. In 1930, there were a few houses on both sides of the only main road which was located in the heart of the village, but later more streets were introduced which led off the main road to give houses extending along the main road. In 2010, the local shops were pulled down while the post office remained. The two lands area for agriculture purposes to the north-east and south-west of the village were converted into the accommodation areas for housing demands. In addition, on the opposite side of the post office, the primary school was enlarged with two blocks. Gardens were formed in 1930, however they gave way to more houses and beside the retirement home in 2010 which has been enlarged from the large house.
The two maps illustrate the
main
development which has taken place in
Stoleford
’s
village
during a period of 80 years.

Overall
, it seems that the
village
has been
modernised
because
the large number of
houses
increased
dramatically
while the farmland vanished completely.

In 1930, there were a few
houses
on both sides of the
only
main
road which
was located
in the heart of the
village
,
but
later more streets
were introduced
which led off the
main
road to give
houses
extending along the
main
road.

In 2010, the local shops
were pulled
down while the post office remained. The two lands area for agriculture purposes to the north-east and south-west of the
village
were converted
into the accommodation areas for housing demands.

In addition
, on the opposite side of the post office, the primary school
was enlarged
with two blocks. Gardens
were formed
in 1930,
however
they gave way to more
houses
and beside the retirement home in 2010 which has
been enlarged
from the large
house
.
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