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The maps shows 2 pictures of the town

The maps shows 2 pictures of the town Q2MM9
The given plan represents the change's that has been made in the town know as Islip from 2010 to 2015 It is visible that there has been some alteration made in the town. In 2010, there was a main road in the town across which shops resided. Towards the southeast region, there was a park located. Rural areas were located in the northern part of town. Housing resided in two parts of the town. One was on the south side, a nearby school towards the west and another one is at the center of the town. The town witnessed major development in the next years. The main road was redesign into a dual carriageway due to modification there was enormous space available for development. A bus station was constructed beside the shopping mall which has car parking nearby. Another striking feature was the new housing created on the South- East side near the park and another one was in the Northern region. Despite the apparently significant changes, the town retains the basic elements of housing, shops, park, and school with the addition of a bus station and shopping centre
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Islip
from 2010 to 2015

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alteration made in the
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. In 2010, there was a main road in the
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across which shops resided. Towards the southeast region, there was a park located. Rural areas
were located
in the northern part of
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town
. Housing resided in two parts of the
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town
. One was on the south side, a nearby school towards the west and another one is at the center of the town.

The
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town
witnessed major development in the
next
years. The main road was redesign into a dual carriageway due to modification there was enormous space available for development. A bus station
was constructed
beside the shopping mall which has car parking nearby. Another striking feature was the new housing created on the South- East side near the park and another one was in the Northern region.

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apparently
significant
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changes
, the
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retains the basic elements of housing, shops, park, and school with the addition of a bus station and shopping
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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