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The three table charts show the changes of annual spending of the UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three table charts show the changes of annual spending of the UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. dkDJr
The three circular charts depict the information about changes of annual spending which was done by United Kingdom school during 1981, 1991 and 2001. The data has been celibrated in percentage. In the year of 1981, the school spent highest amount on teacher's salaries which was recorded as 40%. Whereas, they used only 2% amount of money for insurance. The second highest percentage was noticed in the case of salaries of others workers which was 28%. School spent equal amount on resources and furniture and equipment with 15 percent. Turning to the 1991, they spent more amount on teacher's salaries as compared to previous decade and it was highest again with 50%. The amount of insurance increased by one percent but it was the least spending as previous year. The school spent less money on other worker's salaries than 1981 which was noticed 22%. The percentage of resources inclined with 5 percentile than previous spending. The spending on furniture and equipment by school was decreased rapidly with 5%. In the case of 2001, the UK school used money on salaries of teachers only 45% which was five percent less than 1991 but it was maximum spending. During this year they spent more amount of money on insurance but still it showed least proportion. In other worker's salaries there was rapid decline as school spent only 15 percent amount. School incurred on resources less than half as compared to spending of 1991. The expenses made by school increased rapidly in the case of furniture and equipment which was 23%. Overall, the UK School spent more amount on teacher's salaries between 1981, 1991 and 2001.
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