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The maps show the changes that took place in Westerling between 2000 and 2011

The maps show the changes that took place in Westerling between 2000 and 2011 ArLDw
The maps demonstrate the changes to Westerling between 2000 and 2011. Overall, it is interesting to note that there has been a significant modernisation with some new facilities added, on the contrary fewer trees and open spaces. A major development is that the road in the north of Westerling was converted into a motorway. Looking first at the west of Green Street, a number of changes occurred. For example, the open space which was situated in the northwest was replaced with the blocks of flats. The factories west of the shops were demolished and turned into a multi-storey car park. East of Green Street, even greater changes took place. Most of the woodland was cut down and was turned into a golf club. In addition, the detached houses were converted into a hotel. The school remained the same. Besides, the bus station, street market and car park were disappeared and they were replaced with the bus and railway station. In the southeast, a technopark was constructed next to the school.
The maps demonstrate the
changes
to
Westerling
between 2000 and 2011.

Overall
, it is interesting to note that there has been a significant
modernisation
with
some
new facilities
added
,
on the contrary
fewer trees and open spaces.

A major development is that the road in the north of
Westerling
was converted
into a motorway. Looking
first
at the west of Green Street, a number of
changes
occurred.
For example
, the open space which
was situated
in the northwest
was replaced
with the blocks of flats. The factories west of the shops
were demolished
and turned into a
multi-storey
car park.

East of Green Street, even greater
changes
took place. Most of the woodland was
cut
down and
was turned
into a golf club.
In addition
, the detached
houses
were converted
into a hotel. The school remained the same.
Besides
, the bus station, street market and car park were
disappeared and
they
were replaced
with the bus and railway station. In the southeast, a
technopark
was constructed
next
to the school.
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