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The information about GDP sector agriculture

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The service sector was at lion's share in all the given year whereas, the agricultural zone showed an opposition. It is manifested from the first glimpse that in 2016, 13% of GDP was sent by the first given sector that is of agriculture, while, the ratio was decreased by 2% and noticed at 11% for the same sector in the next given year. Moreover, in the later year 15%of GDP was given by agriculture. Moving to the field of industry, it's 22 % GDP was devoted in 2016, and it was showing the incline of 3 %for 2017. In 2018 the GDP in percentage by industries was recorded at 30 %. Additionally, the remaining zone is of service which contributed 65% in 2016 and decreased by 11% shown for 2017, whilst, 55%of GDP was present by service sector in 2016.
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