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The graph illustrates the data about number of applications received by four universities

The graph illustrates the data about number of applications received by four universities J36pw
The diagram gives the information about number of application by four universities such as Atherton University, Alstead University, the University of Lakewood and Lindslade college. The left side contented the data of numbers of student, and below shows a time period between 1980 and 2010 year. The four lines describes the changes of numbers of student in a certain period. In the begining of 1980 the highest numbers of student application received by the University of Lakewood. 5 years later this value fell near to 3000. By 1985 Atherton Universitys number of application from 2000 climb to 4000. During the next 15 years from 1980 Lakewood declaned in less than 3000 although in 1980 this value was near to 5000. Between 1980 and 2010 have noticed fluctuation in the account of students, around 1995 this number leveled of to 4000. In 2000 Alstead and Atherton Universitys reach a peak of more than 5000. After this in 5 years this value by Alstead University dropped sharply. From 1990 to 2010 the number of application by the University of Lakewood stay at the same level.
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Atherton
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,
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Alstead
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, the
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of Lakewood and
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Lindslade
college. The
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, and below
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a time period between 1980 and 2010
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in a certain period.

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received by the
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University
of Lakewood. 5 years later this value fell near to 3000. By 1985
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Atherton
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from 2000 climb to 4000. During the
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declaned
in less than 3000 although in 1980 this value was near to 5000. Between 1980 and 2010 have noticed fluctuation in the account of
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, around 1995 this
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leveled of to 4000. In 2000
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Alstead
and
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reach a peak of more than 5000.
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Alstead
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dropped
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. From 1990 to 2010 the
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of Lakewood stay at the same level.
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