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the maps below show the layouts of central school in 2005 and 2015.

the maps below show the layouts of central school in 2005 and 2015. nxbre

The map illustrates the transformation of Central School over the period of 10 years. Overall, a substantial development along with a few demolitions can be observed in the layouts of the Central school. In 2005, the north side of the school had a parking area, a soccer field and KG section standing besides each other. To the south, the parking area was reconstructed reducing almost half of the area occupied by it previously. In addittion to that, the other half of the parking area and the earlier built soccer field was merged together to build an auditorium. Moreover, in 2015 the KG section was shifted towards the east direction, almost reducing to one-third of the area occupied by it originally. Furthermore, the primary section was extended in to the remaining one-third portion of KG section, hence increasing the portion area occupied by it. At the same time, no changes were made to the secondary section and the assembly area of the school.

The map illustrates the transformation of Central School over the period of 10 years. Overall
, a substantial development along with a few demolitions can be observed
 in the layouts of the Central school.

In 2005, the north side of the school had a parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, a soccer field and KG You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
 standing besides
 each other. To the south, the parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
was reconstructed
 reducing almost half of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 occupied by it previously. In Possible spelling mistake found.additionaddiction
addittion
 to that, the other half of the parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and the earlier built soccer field was merged
 together to build an auditorium.

Moreover
, in 2015 the KG You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
was shifted
 towards the east direction, almost reducing to one-third of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 occupied by it originally
. Furthermore
, the primary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
was extended
 in to the remaining one-third portion of KG You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
, hence
 increasing the portion You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 occupied by it. At the same time, no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
were made
 to the secondary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
 and the assembly You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of the school. 