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The maps show the changes in Felixstone from 1967 to 2001.

The maps show the changes in Felixstone from 1967 to 2001. pKJMD
The two maps depict the changes that had taken place in Felixstone between 1967 and 2001. Overall, there has been considerable development in Felixstone in the building, infrastructure, and entertainment. Felixstone is situated on the North side of a Sea and the facilities can be reached from the two high streets. In 1967, in the northeast corner, there was farmland and on the opposite side, a golf course. On the two sides of the vertical high street, there were many shops. A fish market, marina, and pier were found in the southeast part of Felixstone. Furthermore, a Café was constructed on the north side of the marina, and next to it, a Hotel was placed. On the west, there was a set of dunes and a forest. In 2001, the farmland was replaced with a hotel, which has a swimming pool and two tennis courts. The fish market, pier, and marina were demolished and were turned into a private beach. The public beach is located in the centre-right below the Café. A car park was added to the previous hotel. The right side of shops was turned into apartments, and under the dunes, wind turbines were placed.
The two maps depict the
changes
that had taken place in
Felixstone
between 1967 and 2001.
Overall
, there has been considerable development in
Felixstone
in the building, infrastructure, and entertainment.

Felixstone
is situated
on the North side of a Sea and the facilities can
be reached
from the two high streets. In 1967, in the northeast corner, there was farmland and on the opposite side, a golf course. On the two
sides
of the vertical high street, there were
many
shops. A fish market, marina, and pier
were found
in the southeast part of
Felixstone
.
Furthermore
, a Café
was constructed
on the north side of the marina, and
next
to it, a Hotel
was placed
. On the west, there was a set of dunes and a forest.

In 2001, the farmland
was replaced
with a hotel, which has a swimming pool and two tennis courts. The fish market, pier, and marina
were demolished
and
were turned
into a private beach. The public beach
is located
in the
centre-right
below the Café. A car park was
added
to the previous hotel. The right side of shops
was turned
into apartments, and under the dunes, wind turbines
were placed
.
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